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Haiku #4 Tenshi

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Wind speaks with your voice,
You are made out of thin air;
Perfect illusion...

Heart beats excited;
You evaporate again,
Love shall never be
Got inspired after reading "On wondering what the one is doing right now", by :iconthemoormaiden: [link]

I... am not sure if I should call this a haiku. Technically they're two haikus but they don't speak about nature... so... Maybe free haiku?
Seems the only poetry I can get is made with 17 syllables.

...Books are my sweetheart...

Tenshi means "Angel"

Hmm... I am not sure about the punctuation. Any help or point-outs? Should I leave it with no punctuation marks whatsoever?

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Your fantastic literature has been featured here!
I'd appreciate it if you took five minutes to give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal! :)