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deliverancethe seabed begs 
Remnant
A shadow, a ghost,
form hidden within layers
of aging fabric.

A city doorway is all
the shelter she can hope for.
Expensive NicetiesExpensive Niceties
 
Let’s spend all we have
‘Cause pain is so expensive
Do we have enough cash?
Life Haiku.We obtain our want
We realise discontent
Forever searching.

© Rocio Belinda Mendez 2013
RageI'd like to punch her.
Make the empty words stop. I'm
crazy am I not?
Now HaikuSave tonight, right now
Pause it there, forever more
It is now–– that counts.

© Rocio Belinda Mendez 2013
Haiku #3Spring’s downpour beckons,
Promising chasm instantly
Abstracted and bare
Ideal
Sueños,
Constelaciones del subconsciente
No es necesario un telescopio
False SubtletiesLipstick hangs like blood
on her lips - she smiles, eyes dance
behind masked exterior
of decaying skin
that droops the edges of her
eyes like secret masquerade.
HumanidadHumanidad,
El verdadero cancer
de la actualidad
GodWhy should I believe?

He created everything.

He himself is flawed.
KatalinaEn la pradera
No halle mas que amapolas
¡Oh divina suerte !
Te he encontrado

Truthtruth is coming soon
find out what has been hidden
find out what is right

what lies have we
been told to cover up the truth
why are we lied too?

Can truth set you free?
can it break you chains today?
what is it worth?

to tell the truth
such a simple little thing
with consequences

unforeseen right now
what can we do to tell the truth
from lies told to us?
Delusion  I write so much . . . as

  if anyone gave a damn

    about what I make.
Hidden facesPretty pretty mask
Your visage makes others smile
Ugly truths are veiled
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La lluvia era la única cosa que podía ver con otros sentidos. La oía repiquetear contra las banquetas y los cristales. La olía mojando el pasto y la basura de las calles. Sentía las gotas frías correr por mi cuello. Degustaba los colores dulces y salados de la lluvia con viento.
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Haiku #6 Kurai hi

:icontisserande-d-encre:

Sun burns in shadows
And darkness becomes too bright;
Light can leave you blind
:icontisserande-d-encre:
Too much light slowly leads you to darkness.
Too much darkness suddenly leads you to light.

"Kurai hi" means dark sun.

Any help with how to punctuate this will be awesome.

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Comments, critiques, faves, smiles, point-outs, typos, stars, moons, sunrises, guns, torches, anything will be always very much appreciated. :)
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*lombregrise Feb 2, 2013  Professional Writer
This piece is feat here / Cette pièce est invitée ici : [link] :rose:
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~tisserande-d-encre Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
O.O Wow, je vous remerci! Je suis très flattée. C'est un honeur.
Merci beaucoup! ^^
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*lombregrise Feb 4, 2013  Professional Writer
avec plaisir :)
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~valkvick Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like this! As far as suggestions on punctuation? The thing that came to my mind was simply adding a semicolon after "bright" merely to add a little bit of structure to your thought. What do you think? I always struggle with punctuation in my poems. Punctuation and capitalization are always my killers.
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~tisserande-d-encre Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
Wow, thanks very much ^^ I'm sure that will help.
Punctuating poetry is always a pain :no:
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`vespera Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh the title :heart:
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~tisserande-d-encre Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
Glad you liked it :)
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*0hgravity Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's been a while :)

interesting inversion - it works, strangely enough.
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~tisserande-d-encre Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
God, I know :| A century since the last time I posted something. I will try to mend things though.

Haha, thanks. ^^
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